You are wanting to go for clean and professional, so I would suggest to do something with the "HAB". It is too jumbled together and messy. It seems that they may be overlapping too much.
Or, you could try a different font. I will be checking back in to see if you post anything different. I hope this helps.
The HAB looks a lot better. If you don't mind me asking, what made you choose these colors?
and of course the right side gets cut off :/
well, the colors were given to me in the brief, i just basically started playing around with different combinations
Nice work but can be much better if you use another font face and placement can be better. Also between shape and your fonts should be some sort of similarity. Looks like the parts are separate.
Another part that came to my attention that where end of red triangle touches the font.
I agree as well. You wouldn't want the line overlapping with the text because it can become hard to read. Also, do you think that it would be beneficial to place a "&" between Alvis and Billingsley?