UCreative

Forum, Graphic Design Gallery, and Social Network

Like This Page

Share This Page
Bookmark This Page
  • Design Float
  • Digg
  • Delicious
  • Design Bump
  • Design Related
  • The Web Blend
  • DZone

Memorial Day 2012 Poster

Support our troops, end the war... Let me know what you guys think about this design!!! Thank you.

Comment

You need to be a member of UCreative to add comments!

Join UCreative

Comment by Andy on June 1, 2012 at 1:19pm

No problem, I hoped it helped!

Comment by Armando on June 1, 2012 at 12:26am
Thanks for the critique man, always welcome it...

I see what you mean, especially at the top where it says "remember our troops"... I will have to watch that.

Be on the look out for more of my designs, I'm trying to do at least one a week... I'm trying to get to your guy's level :)
Comment by Andy on May 31, 2012 at 1:39pm

Neat. Great way to remember our troops. One thing that I am concerned about is how tight everything looks. The type looks like it needs a bit of kerning too, but I love the vibrant colors and like Dean had mentioned, the symbolism of the helmet and gun. Good job. :)

Comment by Armando on May 31, 2012 at 7:36am
Thanks for the comment Dean, I totally agree with you about the text/color. I was doing this poster on a laptop and was deceived by my screen's brightness... Only till a couple days later when I noticed on my iPhone how dark it was :/

Thanks for your feedback man :)
Comment by Dean Neitman on May 31, 2012 at 7:06am

Not bad. I like the helmet on the gun at the bottom. The thing that bothers me most though is the nearly black color on the red and white. Perhaps the traditional royal blue might work better. Red and black are very close to each other in brightness and then the white is a very stark contrast. It makes some areas really hard to read like "remember our troops" which plays havoc on the eyes with the red and white stripes in back and smaller font size. The text wants to blend with the red and jumps off of the white. Also seems more like the size is a bit odd for poster but nothing wrong with that if your printer has the capabilities though. Hats off to our servicemen.

Advertisers

Follow Us on

© 2013   Created by Team Ucreative.

Badges  |  Report an Issue  |  Terms of Service